Please take notes of these comments. Incorporate this to paper please.
“You should explain what happened more clearly. You don’t mention anything about the prostitute that he was involved with which I think is an important part of the story. ”
“There are many other factors that contributed to his illness such as a severe case of depression brought on by the guilt he felt for his brother having to support him, and the fact that he considered himself a failure due to no one buying any of his paintings.”
“What you have here is just the beginning. I don’t see a description of the painting. You seem to focus on van Gogh’s hospitalization which is fine, but try to build the rest of your paper with more information about the painting itself, and the aspects about the artist that helps us to understand why the painting looks the way that it does.”
I have attached these comments to just give an idea of what is missing and what can be incorporated.
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