Personal business plan

One page (up to 600 words) that summarizes:
• A long-term vision statement
• The “external” opportunities that exist
• Your “internal” (personal) strengths
• A strategy for yourself and your life over the next three to five years
• At least one “failure” from your past and what you learned from it in terms of maximizing your potential for the future

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I was born in a small city in Kazakhstan called ”Taraz”. As a child, I always dreamed of something big. Soon after my school graduation at the age of 15, I traveled alone for the first time and the trip was to London. My goal was to improve my English skills. In London, I came across a big city for the first time, where I experienced a lot of ups and downs and I even got kicked out from the school I studied in for 6 months because of breaking a few rules, however, I didn’t give up and traveled to a small town in England called ‘Eastbourne” to continue my education. After this big journey, at the age of sixteen, my mother realized that Europe was quite dangerous for me. Not long after, my mother sent me to study at the university in Dubai which she considered to be a much safer place. After graduation, I decided to go back to Europe and study my masters in Fashion and business, as I liked to create different outfits and believed I could change the world of fashion. while studying I was delighted to travel around the world, explore the beauty of the world, which often helped her get inspiration for my new clothing line. Two years later after the masters, I decided to open my first small business in Europe, it was a cool clothing store where you could be advised about fashion and purchase some good quality clothes. After a few years, I finally gained enough experience to open a global franchise. And created my clothing brand, called “ YBS”. My clothing store allowed people to express themselves.
I wasn’t afraid of risks, I told myself to “Never give up”. Twenty years later I became a famous businessperson with my successful clothing line “YBS”, that made millions. Later I had two kids a lovely husband and a roof above my head