Paper revision is editing needed. I would like my paper’s arguments to be focused on the central theme and for it not to go off track. If you think that changing the main theme is better suited, you are welcome to alter the paper. Please do not make any changes to the quotes. Text documents, which this essay was developed from, are attached along with the guided prompt of this essay. Any sign to indicate the changes (e.g. underline, highlight) would be helpful for us to share our opinions. Feel free to contact me at any time.