last sentence in the introduction is your thesis. It is direct and strong.
In paragraph number 2, there seems to be an abundance of valid information. Your support is relevant and summarizes the text.
Much of the information in the development of the essay requires documentation of text, in-text citation, and your work shows the inclusion of weekly notes.
Make sure that you use signal words when necessary to make your paragraphs even more coherent and to give the reader a heads up that here comes my supporting evidence. Thanks for adding citations, however, giving credit for paraphrases, quotes, etc… Otherwise, the final essay will pick it up as plagiarism, even if that is not your intention. Again, review this week’s tutorial video and notes on how to make the essay flow more thoroughly from paragraph to the other. I hope my comments help with advancing your essay. I look forward to reading the final essay.
Professional homework help features
Our ExperienceHowever the complexity of your assignment, we have the right professionals to carry out your specific task. ACME homework is a company that does homework help writing services for students who need homework help. We only hire super-skilled academic experts to write your projects. Our years of experience allows us to provide students with homework writing, editing & proofreading services.
Free revision policy$10
Free bibliography & reference$8
Free title page$8
How our professional homework help writing services work
You first have to fill in an order form. In case you need any clarifications regarding the form, feel free to reach out for further guidance. To fill in the form, include basic informaion regarding your order that is topic, subject, number of pages required as well as any other relevant information that will be of help.Complete the order form
Once we have all the information and instructions that we need, we select the most suitable writer for your assignment. While everything seems to be clear, the writer, who has complete knowledge of the subject, may need clarification from you. It is at that point that you would receive a call or email from us.Writer’s assignment
As soon as the writer has finished, it will be delivered both to the website and to your email address so that you will not miss it. If your deadline is close at hand, we will place a call to you to make sure that you receive the paper on time.Completing the order and download