This is research assignment on the “first dinosaur evolved. The professor expect us to put in details as much as possible about the theories of dinosaurs evolution. There should be in text citation and a work cited page at the end. I am going to give you the source i found and a rough draft. I will also add the professor feedback on the rough draft which will help you to know what she want to be include on the paper. I only have 3 sources. You can use them and add more or you can find your own source if you want. All I need is a well written research paper on first dinosaur evolution. I would not want the paper to be posted online here after completion. I will prefer it sent to my email because my professor will check online to see if there anything similar to my paper.
This are the various comments that my professor wrote on my draft.
You have a lot of good information, but it is not organized well. I’m having a very hard time understanding your paper.
Direct from the professor to me.
I recommend writing down on scrap paper the 2 or 3 main theories on dinosaur evolution that you are working with. What were the traits of the earliest dinosaurs in each of these theories, what is the evidence, what was the time period. Make sure YOU understand the evidence and the times (not just naming the period – give dates). Then lay out each of those theories clearly in your paper. You may need another source to get some more information. Was there anything in the ecosystem at the time that drove the evolution from reptiles? Maybe not, but you may find more info.
Also – you have good sources, but no in-text citations. You need to cite your sources for every fact you use – sometime multiple times per paragraph.
other comments on the draft from the instructor
1.which group includes all of these? You need to make this much clearer. There is no need to just list dinosaurs. What is the main point of your paper? State it!
2.What are the main points of your paper? You the first fossil evidence, earth’s climate, etc. Lay it out and organize your paper that way.
3.You need to use in-text citation. Where did all of this information come from?
4.And those can’t be known to be the first dinosaurs evolved if this is earlier. Were those previously thought to be the first?
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