EDITING AND PROOFREADING: POLI SCI: POWER, MONEY AND PLACE

POLI-SCI MASTERS/pHD EXPERTS ONLY!!!!!!!! please! this is the most important assignment of all my academic career so far.

ALL INSTRUCTIONS ARE IN THE DOCUMENT, after being hired i will grant you access to my school’s online platform to get all the class material that you need.

For the midterm, here are the mistakes I made that got me a grade of D.
I have also attached my midterm so you can take a look and avoid these same mistakes.

PROF’s feedback on midterm:

The principle weakness the TA identified in both essays was the lack of an identifiable thesis. Secondary issues concerned writing clarity and style, and errors in the citations/bibliography.

For the final exam, we suggest that you focus on three things:
Have a clear thesis statement in your introduction that responds directly to the question;
Follow the guidelines for writing style and organization in the course’s Writing Guidelines available on myCourses;
Take much greater care with your citations and bibliographies. Use proper, consistent citations (including the use of last names rather than first names), and ensure that there is a bibliographic entry for every source cited.

PLEASE FOLLOW VERY CAREFULLY EVERY INSTRUCTION, this prof is extremely severe when it comes to grading.

I uploaded my essay, so please modify it and correct it in order to follow the prof’s requirements as thoroughly as possible. Thanks