Admission essay to psychology grad program

Hi, I am writing to get into a psychology masters program. English was my second language growing up and I need some editing. I also need a short intro and a short conclusion paragraph.

the instructions are:

Students are asked to answer the following essay questions as part of the admission packet. Each essay should be 3-5 pages in length.
Discuss how relationships with parents, caregivers, siblings, or other significant persons affected your personality development and your interest in becoming a Marriage and Family Therapist.

Essays are designed to assess:
Insight and self-awareness about one’s own patterns and how they affect work and relationships.
Motivation for becoming a therapist.
Writing ability.
Information to consider when writing the essays:
Awareness of one’s personal, familial, and a cultural pattern is important. You are expected to have, and be able to articulate, self-knowledge and self-assessment.
Attention to, and coping with, personal and interpersonal problems is important to the role of a MAC student and MET.
Appropriate self-disclosure is an important aspect of learning in the MAC, in supervision, and in the required psychotherapy.
You are expected to write well as both a graduate student and as a psychology professional.
You should be specific as possible in the essays and disclose at whatever level you think is appropriate.